R.T.II's QUOTE

"If you lose passion in what you do. You lose a part of what you are."

~R.T. II

Monday, June 30, 2014

SHADOW GENESIS: INCEPTION | PROLOGUE (Preview)



Shadow Genesis: Inception

Prologue (Preview)




This prologue has been rewritten several times since the original prelude in my current novel. Being this is a 'Reboot', I wanted the prologue to sound scriptural. My family is a mix religion sort. Not everyone is on the same page with religion as a whole, but we all respect one another’s beliefs. From Christianity to Islam, this big family tree of trees of mine is very diversified. Me being a spiritual sort, is open to a wide range of religious and spiritual beliefs, because I was taught not to judge others and respect all (respect begets respect ultimately).

When writing this prologue, my idea is to implement a scripture from an actual ‘biblical’ tome (re-reading Genesis 1 for an idea) in the universe said story lives within. I am still developing the references of said passage and the one responsible for that excerpt since with this prologue, it is from an ancient book explaining the creation of Shadow Genesis’s world Shadara. Originally Shadow Realm (Shadowrealm for a short time in revisions), the world is very unique thus unlike the usual descriptions of your typical fantasy realm. Not saying that all other works of fiction are boring and typical in world descriptions, for in truth I have learned from those very works. Beating my brain, Shadara is born as I have stripped Shadow Realm from its title. Shadowrealm however is still a secondary name for outsiders.

Back on the prologue below, this is what I have now in second draft. I hope you all enjoy this biblical like creation as it explains how its ‘god’, as well as the first sentient beings to inhabit it conceive Shadara. Call it a glimpse into historical records or something.



***

First, there is darkness. Then there is light. The light breaks to a shimmer, scattering its infinite brilliance. Thus birthing twilight’s dark. Inside the cradle of stars, a realm is born. By breath of its maker, roaming still its watery wake, he deems his creation forever in life, to live endlessly in its cradle of stars. So he blankets the night sky with eos veil, and from his finger, the light of Luna. The maker saw his work in please, and he divides Luna from eternal night. Where night is awake beneath Luna’s light, darkness is even, while Luna’s light breaks darkness to dawn.
The maker deems this so with please, then parts its watery seas, and within its airy gap comes land. The maker molds and erects the land; its water recedes and gathers around it. Now land exists with sea, and the maker is pleased. So he waves his hand across barren land, sprouting from voiceless call comes the flora of life. The realm grows with vegetation: from the smallest of plants to the greatest of trees, all bestowed by the will of its maker.
Then the maker waves his hand once more, and from the flora comes the realms wild creatures of land, sky, and sea. The maker saw this with please, but his creation is still incomplete.
From the core of his being, the maker’s flesh of life is harvest. He waves his hand once more, and the flesh of his being spreads across the realm. Flesh becomes sentient and with the wild and its creatures lives the first of his image. The maker saw this with please, and so the firsts will rule over all creatures of land, sky, and sea.
The firsts as design will soften the realm with great diversity and swell in greater number. As the maker saw this too with please, he brings forth his last creations: the heart of the world, and its kin.
From the realm’s heart surface the true kind, kindred of the core and overseers of the entire world and all that is existing. He gives them a name, “Dark Elementai,” and all of the names of the firsts who now roam. He names the world’s core after his own, and all that is edible is theirs to consume.
Then the maker said to them. “I, Umbra Divinius of Dark, give you the world, the beloved nightrealm of Shadara, made in my image, and forever in dark's twilight. Embrace its creation, and rule its eternal course. Know its creatures, the mass of shadaran kind, and guard its crux that beats beneath its earth, for it is the reason of your existence, the life core of all that is my creation. Know the passage of time, guided by night’s Luna, and all its periods and recess.”
The dark elementai and the firsts of shadaran kind follow his words, and with the last of his breath, he ignites the world. From the center of its core light rises and lives. Illuminating within every plant, stone, and creature of chosen. The realm of Shadara illumes with life, as light and dark lives in harmony. The maker saw his creation complete, while into the twilight’s dark he ebbs with please.

No comments: