R.T.II's QUOTE

"If you lose passion in what you do. You lose a part of what you are."

~R.T. II
Showing posts with label Reboot. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Reboot. Show all posts

Friday, January 2, 2015

FRIDAY UPDATE - 3RD DRAFT NEAR DONE



 
  • 1” margin on all sides of manuscript doc.
  • Set up title page.
  • Number pages on first page of story text.
  • Headers on each page – Name/Title of novel in caps plus page number.
  • Each new chapter on its own page – Chapter Title starts 1/3 down on page (six spaces before Chapter Title) – Chapter number and title in caps.
  • Chapter body starts 4-6 spaces after title.
  • Indent five spaces per new paragraph. Double space text - 12pt Font (Times New Roman or Courier – Arial too).



And that, is my manuscript format guide…

New Year’s came in decent. Now we’re on Day 2 of January. Soon March is coming, well after February, and I’ll be 30 years old.

I’m getting...old?

Today I took the time to make sure novel formatting was good to go. I noticed it was off during my edits. It’s important to have that situated and on point for that is one of the many reasons why most stories are discarded upon submission. There is a sting of nervousness that gets to me here, since I am technically finished with the 3rd draft. I just want to be sure everything looks neat. Come to think of it, I planned to send this through another pair of eyes before giving it the go, so the publishing will hit when the nook and crannies are fixed, like plot holes and character build and stuff.

This is the part where I get very skittish and a bit scrupulous over my manuscripts, and here I’ve been all confident and sure of myself. Human nature, but I’m not afraid… or am I?

Ah, the mind and soul can be a conflicting state sometimes in me.


Friday, November 7, 2014

Short & Sweet

At the moment I am currently revising chapter seven of my novel's third draft.

This is but a short and sweet blog post (from the phone) to keep everyone checking up on my progress updated.

Have not touched Project Multiverse, Slumgarde, or the graphic novel script to Project Chosen One this week, but as usual I make that up.

Still having s bit of a odd tech issue with Microsoft Office (unsure if I explained) for I am unable to access the suite, which means my OneNote files are held hostage.

About to pull a Liam Neeson on this thing, if you know what I mean.












Really need my notes.

Wednesday, October 29, 2014

CONCEIVED IN HIS NAME: SHADOW GENESIS: INCEPTION EXCERPT [Revised]

"I wanted Shadow Genesis to have a bit of a 'Beginning Feel' as to how the realm of Shadara, originally Shadowrealm in the first novel, was created. Being one raised under multiple spiritual and religious beliefs, I turned to Genesis I for inspiration. I am spiritual by default, but I also respect others sense of faith."




Sometime back (this old blog post) I revealed the prologue to 'Shadow Genesis: Inception' as a means to further explain my aim to relate the title and its events with the creation of Shadara itself and what is to come through the series. Pulling from the 'Greatest Book of all books', I discovered how much my work clicks with Genesis I in the bible, and how the creator brought our world into existence. What better way than telling the world through others?

Take Elder Scrolls for example. In game books provide various lore written by other entities in the world of Nirn for the player to discover and immerse themselves in. The player gets a better feel for the Elder Scrolls universe and its 'life'... catch my drift without further gamer elaboration?

Without further explanation, check out my newly revised opening to Inception. I took the 'Prologue' tag off (after much contemplation and advice from others) and made it an nice excerpt written by one of Shadara's inhabitants.



Conceived in His Name

From Darkness to light, births first twilight. It breaks, shimmers, to scatter endless brilliance. To conceive twilight’s dark, the infinite of stars. Betwixt its cradle luster, our home is born.
By breath of its maker, who roams still its watery wake, he deems his creation forever in essence, to live endless amidst its cradle of stars.
He blankets the night sky with Eos veil, and from his finger, the light of Luna. The maker saw his work with please, and he divides Luna from eternal night. Where night stirs beneath Luna’s spark, darkness stirs even, while Luna’s light breaks darkness to dawn.
The maker deems this so with please, then parts its watery seas, and within its airy gap arise land. The maker molds and erects this land; its waters recede and gather. Now land exists with sea, and the maker is pleased. He waves his hand across barren land, sprout from voiceless call. In comes the flora of life.
Our home sprouts vegetation, from the smallest of plants to the greatest of trees. All bestowed by the will of its maker, who steadies his work with please.
Then the maker waves his hand once more, and from flora comes our world’s wilds, creatures of land, sky, and sea. The maker saw this with please, but his creation respires incomplete.
From the core of his being, the maker’s flesh, the essence of life, is harvest. He waves his hand once more, and the flesh of his being seeds our home. Flesh becomes sentient, and with the wild and its creatures lives the first of his image. The maker saw this with please, and so the firsts shall rule over all creatures of land, sky, and sea.
The firsts shall soften our home with great diversity, to swell great and plenty. As the maker saw this too with please, he brings forth his last creations, the heart of the world, and its kin.
From the realm’s heart surface the true kind, kindred of the crux and overseers of our home and all that is existing. He gives them a name, “Elementai,” and all of the names of the firsts who now roam. He names our world’s crux after his own, and all that is edible theirs to consume.
Then the maker said to them. “I, Umbra Divinius of Dark, give you the world, the beloved nightrealm of Shadara, made in my image, and forever in darks twilight. Embrace its creation, and rule its eternal course. Know its creatures, the mass of Shadaran kind, and guard its crux that beats beneath its earth, for it is the reason of your existence, the life core of all that is my creation. Know the passage of time, guided by night’s Luna, and all its periods and recess.”
The elementai and the firsts of Shadaran kind follow his words, and with the last of his breath, he ignites the world. From the center of its core light rises and lives. Kindling every plant, stone, and creature of chosen.
The realm of Shadara illumes with life, as light and dark lives in harmony. The maker saw his creation complete, while into the twilight’s dark he ebbs with please.


-Ty’Ka Tikhal
(Shadara’s Genesis: First Creed)





Though Shadow Genesis Volume One: Preludes of War is out... and been out since 2010, I still suggest checking it out, as well as staying up to date on the coming of its reboot. I have been taking a good break before working on its 3rd draft while also checking out different publishing options both traditional and indie. Leaning forward towards Book Baby for that one, but then there is this interesting site called JukePop I have discovered through a fellow author name Joan Albright. I recommend checking her out!


And now I go back to note taking without OneNote, working with Evernote, and getting my gamer fix on... among other things.


Mark of Umbra | Khan Dynasty
 

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

SHADOW KHAN: Character Concept Revised

"I came up with Shadow Khan on a teen angst whim. You know, that angry burst of hormones most of us have that our parents call a 'Phase'? Yeah... Shadow Khan was my dark hero who always faced my demons. Or perhaps Shadow Khan was me, my alter ego, fighting the forces of evil with a band of heroes, friends I trusted, and still trust to this very day. True story though, I am still called Shadow right to this very day, but the 'Dark Hero' changed... dramatically"





For further read on Shadow Khan--to keep from having to re-explain a whole life story's worth--click here. Many know who Shadow Khan is, his conception, and the countless ridicule I have faced throughout my younger years because of what I like and what I do, and still do, like writing and drawing and gaming... and all that good geeky nerd stuff.


The Legendary Shadow Khan
It is funny how things evolve with you in life, and Shadow has evolved so much that I cannot describe the many looks he has taken on, until finally achieving this look... and I am sticking with it.




Shadow's hair has a spiky crown layer up top and down his back like bushy quills along with his long hair that curls at the ends. Its a two-style look combined into one, and it came to me after awhile of pondering and little sketches until taking the time to go 3D with it (took time there for that one). Several other character 'prototypes' were essential for Shadow's recreation.




Soon enough he will have that 'Official Look', but for now, this is the closest to the look I want for him. Done on IMVU with photoshop work (his hair, eyes, face, marks, and a bit of the skin tone), I am pleased to reveal this character concept and will keep as a foundation to work with when the time comes for his saga... and there are many.

Now to redesign that shadowblade of his.

Friday, September 5, 2014

Steady Friday

Today's revision word count: 1036 words (2.9 pages). Undertaking a 500-2000 word push to me is far steadier than my chapter a day push, which I painstakingly hauled off already. Today's 2nd drafting was decent.



Never want to burn out when writing, and writers block can still sneak up if one lacks caution. Now I know I spoken about the block of blocks before, how several factors can cause one to end up in a standstill, but as I further in this slow-coming second draft, I can say that a blockage in writing for me equals a lack of creativity easily remedied by rest and immersing in your hobbies. I took a day off in my week of writing because of it, was actually fear of losing my grip in rewriting Shadow Genesis, so I applied myself to other things. Just like that, I was good to go for the rest of the week, and now that I just finished for the day, it's off to do other things. I have tons of other stuff to brainstorm on. Music also does the trick for when I need new meat by audio influence to add to the ole iPod, and surfing my favorite sites/shows. It actually works for what I am doing. Learned a great deal too… few animals I never knew existed.

Got to love Netflix and those National Geographic showings. My bestiary just exploded with ideas.

It is like this, for years I have been creating, but I never really took time to discover other resources side the already known back in the day. I saw how certain elements work with my projects, like supernatural abilities, real world deities, and other world-wide wonders tickling my fancy and ultimately surfacing with new material able to mold into my already made works. It is a whole new ball game nowadays.

There is also this bothersome thing of vocab that I run into at times. You find a word and try to squeeze out a different synonym/antonym or something to match your character or feel of scene then suddenly you have a sentence (dialogue or narrative) better than the original. What kicks me in the ass is when I go back through my thesaurus, wikis, dictionaries, and other word translators I discover new words... working even more so than before. It is a challenge when creating your own slang and so forth too, but I have fun with it. This goes to say, and many have said this, that one should just write and come back later on an edit unless one is fixed on editing/going.

It is best not to rush, or your story can come out mush.

Trust, I found this out the hard way... hence my reboot. I am my worst critic after all. Now to work on a few new deities for Shadara, play some Skyrim... and see what else is about.

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

SHADOW KHAN PROJECT: Playing With Character Concepts!

When not writing... well sometimes.

I tend to play around when not busy. It's almost always involving something with one of my projects. This past weekend was - as expected - Shadow Genesis. Below are three mock-character promo designs I created just to keep me going in my projects. It is good to have fun with your works, anything from free-writing to various note taking out of the head, sketches, the works, even listen your favorite tunes while doing so. To me that is best thing anyone can do for it takes away the pressure, stress, worries... all of the negatives that can lead to several creative pit-falls... writer's block included.

So here we are below - Click the images for full view via DeviantArt!



http://skx.deviantart.com/art/SHADOW-GENESIS-FB-Cover-3-Malice-and-Hellion-476526881

http://skx.deviantart.com/art/SHADOW-GENESIS-INCEPTION-Aida-and-Na-Kaishia-476780835

http://skx.deviantart.com/art/SHADOW-GENESIS-INCEPTION-Kuma-and-Lucius-476779995



Went on created six of the main characters (five protagonists and one antagonist) that are featured in the original SHADOW GENESIS VOLUME ONE: PRELUDES OF WAR. They will also be featured in SHADOW GENESIS: INCEPTION with other characters as well. All in a bigger and 'improved' story.


Did these over the weekend. Just really added the last two up. Done in IMVU (like several others I shown in previous blog posts) an online chat/game client - sort of but not EXACTLY like Second Life - then photoshopped to completion, therefore these are 'Unofficial' character concepts until I finally get them officially created. I do have a representation of Malice done here with a baby Shadow Khan present, and that's just about it. I do these from time to time to not only show everyone how my characters look (as close as possible until the 'time' comes) but also for my own help with visual cues and reference stuff. I stick these in Scrivener and MS OneNote as a support method when describing characters through narrative. It is always a good idea to draw (as best as you can) your characters, and if you can't do them yourself, can always get a friend on board willing to help, or do like I use to do before trying this out... write their descriptions as detailed as possible so the mind itself can register a proper visual. There are several more characters (as shown in first novel here) but working on them all will be a bit challenging given as to how they are pretty unique in looks, and I rather wait to get them all done officially. No use in speaking on them entirely, therefore focusing on these six at most for now, but they all will be done and accounted for in due time!


Thursday, August 7, 2014

UPDATE

Computer issues...


They happen to us all. I for one cannot stand it (given certain degree). Especially when I am working on a manuscript or other things that a tech’ muck up will just give me the brow quirks. So far so good on the configurations of system, tinkering around and I believe I am working fine.

Update on SG: INCEPTION. I am currently rewriting (again) a big fighting scene that involves two important characters that I wish to expand on more so than I have in the original novel and this reboot’s first draft. Lamest term: needs improvement. Nine chapters are left in this reboot project, and as said before I will be sending for straight critique then third draft. Also will be looking for a few beta testers. I have one up for the read and a few more will hurt not  a bit!

Meanwhile, this weekend I will try to whip up a few more Multiverse shorts that I use to be on top of back in the day. About time to flesh out Ricven some more, plus I have his novel project in pieces via incomplete manuscript. The more random events I write up the better I will be in expanding Ricven and his adventures.




Stay Tuned